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I wish I made it, but unfortunately I'm not Jacob Streilein. I have made a handful of poems in my spare time, but they are shoddy at best.Is that yours, if so props, if not props for posting your good taste, more please, of the last poet or more of what you like.
Well post em or whatever you feel comfortable with.I wish I made it, but unfortunately I'm not Jacob Streilein. I have made a handful of poems in my spare time, but they are shoddy at best.
I'm quite shy about most of my work, but here's one of my latest (dregs) experimental poem I've written. It's personal, but I'd appreciate any feedback or thoughts:Post some of your favorite poems or one you yourself has written.
Reminds me of the (not so vaporwave) Behemoth song Gabriel Blow Your Trumpets, one of my favorite by them (I love the whole album!) The music video is pretty KVLT too.Gabriel is blowing his trumpet,can't you hear the sweet sound of it.The sweet sound of the ending to us,Gods kingdom opens in our eyes but we were to blind to see it.You will punished by his wrath.--MANMANPLEASE
oooh, very very good. I smell delicious French Decadence with a hint of Symbolism here.she came crumbling down the stairs
just like a throw of fairy dice
fumbling her magic
slipping on imaginary ice
in and out of step-ball-change
she rearranged the living room
liquid figurine
popcorn popping on the trampoline
butterfly geometry
she looked at me through scattered eyes
sprays of playing cards
falling on the hallway carpet
Burzum horn blower?to me it reminds me more of a man in a robe blowing a horn on a cliff
I can see that too. Do you have any thing else in similar vein - if you're comfortable sharing? That sort of imagery is something I'm currently into.to me it reminds me more of a man in a robe blowing a horn on a cliff
YESSS! With a little bit of sunn0)))Burzum horn blower?
wow really appreciate it!! yeah i wrote these to the tune of Nefertiti by Wayne Shorter for a demo i did a while back:oooh, very very good. I smell delicious French Decadence with a hint of Symbolism here.
Is this yours?