It's pretty good. The first half is a little repetitive like i'm waiting for the beat to really get going but it's taking too long. I think in 1:45 mark i can hear a faint drizzle? You should higher up the volume on that it will go good with it in my opinion. Good first post on the Macintosh Cafe! Why did you call it "Language Space"?
really nice. the pads could be a little roomier. the high-end in general could be a little more pronounced. and it needs a closed hi-hat at some point. I think I hear one at some points, but it's really quiet and lofi. maybe layer a shaker on top of it. but other than that, pretty neat tune, man. keep it up.