Let's Play/Read For Elise ~Elise no Tame ni~ [COMPLETE]

better for him turning a woman into his own personal urinal than being a spying eye looking at women getting rammed by unknown men in front of their faces...
He might be getting increasingly unhinged, but MC is no cuck. Not yet anyway
 
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Day 5:

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We decided to go to work early today, which really just means showing up on time. We are greeted once again by a scene of the manager yelling at Chitose.

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The manager trusted Chitose to prepare some documents for a meeting, but her mind must have been in another place because she really did screw it up. The files were out of order, the contents were reversed, the papers weren't stapled, etc.


I mean, I know MC-kun is no hard worker, but somehow I think even he could have managed a less sloppy job. That said, this isn't the norm for Chitose, so one has to wonder if something's up.

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We ask her if she's alright. But she basically tells us to shut up.

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Blueshit decides to drop by to add to the commotion. Hioki coldly acknowledges his presence, {"What, did you come to make fun of me again?"}

Ignoring our snark he attempts to act chummy, {"No need to be so rude. We're both colleagues on good terms, aren't we? Hehe."}

Hioki: {"We might be colleagues, but I don't think of you as any kind of friend."}

Blueshit: {"The Hell's wrong with this guy!? What does some loser that can't even do his work properly think he's doing speaking to me like that?"}


Feels good to see MC standup for himself a bit.

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Chitose then butts in, telling Blueshit that she doesn't think he's in any position to talk. Evidently he's not the hardest worker either.

He deflects by attempting to flirt with her and asking if she'll hangout with him after work.

Chitose: {"Why do I have to go out with the likes of you?"}

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Blueshit: {"I never thought she hated me so much, right Hioki?"}

Hioki doesn't respond but thinks to himself, "Who the Hell wouldn't dislike you?"

Before the interaction can continue the manager drops by telling both of us to go back to work.


Really, fuck that guy. It felt good watching Chitose completely shut him down.

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We actually do get back to work, and after some time manage to finish our report. It's about here that MC starts wanting a little coffee break. However, he finds that the kettle is empty. Going to the kitchen to boil some water he runs into Chitose.

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We talk for a bit, and Chitose apologizes for snapping at us earlier. She seems in a much better mood now, and the small talks leads the MC to ask her if she likes this job. She says not in particular, but that she's alright with it. She then asks us the same question. We tell her that we don't really like it, but that we can't really complain since we get a paycheck for doing practically nothing.

Chitose: {"Hmm, the way you said 'doing nothing' implies that you do feel some guilt about it after all."}

We then ask her about what kind of job she had before joining this company. She says that she worked with a company that focused on organizing events, and that somehow it related to the media. She then mentions that she felt like she already told us this, but then realizes that it was blueshit who she had this conversation with. She then reassures us, saying that it was only early on when joining the company that she spoke to him on occasion. Before she learned what kind of person he is.

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She asks us if we have a gf. We tell her no, but she then comments on the multiple girls she's seen us interact with. We then reassure her that they are nothing more than acquaintances. Then she asks us what we think about her.

Hioki: "I-I think that we're work colleagues."


His big chance finally arrived and he pusses out...

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Getting back to our desk, the manager comes over and asks to see our report. He looks at it with great intensity, which makes Hioki nervous.

Manager: {"This is fine. In fact, if you always submitted reports like this I would actually be grateful."}

Despite submitting it late, he compliments us on our work.

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Chitose: {"I think that's the first time I saw you complimented by the manager."}

She stole the words right out of my mouth.

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Chitose: {"Uh, Hioki. Would you mind leaving together?"}

We respond with startled disbelief, and then she says that she was just kidding. She does ask if we could walk as far as outside the office building with her.

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They walk out of the building and are about to part ways. {"She looks like there's something she want's to say..."}

But just when he thinks that-

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It's Masumi...

This can't be a coincidence at this point

Masumi: {"I came here to meet Hioki."}


Great, so she's stalking us... and probably has been for a while now.

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We try to interject to clear the situation, but Masumi says, and I quote, {"Can't you see I'm talking to someone, just be quite for now!"}

She then starts accusing Chitose of flirting with us. Chitose denies it, but Masumi insists that Chitose wouldn't be casually walking with us right now if there wasn't some interest on her part.

She continues to accuse Chitose of getting in her way, and claims MC-kun to be hers.

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Masumi: {"You can't flirt with him anymore! Because, he promised that he would take me to a love hotel now, got it!?"}

This bitch. She pulled that straight out of her ass. At no point did we ever even imply such a thing.

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Fed up by this stupid melodrama, Chitose storms off. Masumi then looks at us with a calm expression, {"That's the girl you like, right?"}

Yeah...

She then says that it looks like anything that we might have had going on is completely over now. Utterly defeated, we passively admit that's probably true. She drags us away. In a completely devastated state of mind, we just follow along.

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It looks like she dragged us to a hotel after all. MC notes that it's not just the same hotel that her sister also dragged him into, but as luck would have it, the same exact room.

MC is still mostly emotionally dead over what just happened, and Masumi gets annoyed that he barely looks at her. Not just now, but in general she's bothered that he doesn't look at her sexually.

She then asks us if we've ever though about having sex with her. He says no.


I don't think he's ever consciously thought about it, but subconsciously he's definitely had some weird fantasizes involving her. Who knows, maybe those were conscious fantasizes, but those were more violent fantasies than sexual ones imo

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She then pushes MC-kun down onto the bed and climbs on top of him. He protests that she's still a minor. But she mentions that if he really was opposed to it, he would have refused to go into the hotel with her altogether, which he didn't do.

Like a S-class manipulative bitch, she isn't logically wrong here. But she definitely wanted this and pushed things into this direction. But whereas her sister is more of a seductress, Masumi is way more of a gaslighter. I definitely prefer Nanae of the two.

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We bid her farewell, however we notice that she is somewhat fearful. It's worth mentioning that MC did have sex with her (I'm not showing the CG), and the scene itself was fairly vanilla. If MC lost half his virginity on that bed to her sister, he just lost the entire thing to Masumi. However, very abruptly, we got some white flashes and before we knew it the scene was done and we were out of the hotel.

I do wonder if he revealed his more twisted side to her off screen. We really don't know, but her sudden fear of him is definitely suspect.

She leaves, somewhat trembling, and we are now alone.

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Well... I think this picture speaks for itself. To clarify, that's blueshit and beside him is Chitose. Both entering the hotel we just were leaving. We ask them what they are doing, and blue shit tells us, {"Aren't those our words. What were you doing with a high schooler?"}

Chitose interrupts and basically says, "Let's just go in already, why do we have to acknowledge that guy over there."


There is really only one thing to say in this scenario.

God, feels bad man.

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We have some more delusional dreams. First we rewind and replay the most traumatizing parts of today, then we go into a sexual delusion. In this case involving Masumi. After that is done we run into the mysterious severed head. But now her eyes are starting to open...

Day 5 Concluding thoughts:
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When doing some research on this VN a while back, I was exposed to the image of Chitose and blueshit together, so this was a betrayal I was expecting. That said, it really stung. Like walking over a hornets nest and letting them all attack you. I'm no purityfag, but just the fact that Chitose so nonchalantly went into a love hotel with blueshit, I want nothing to do with her now. Although Masumi is obviously worst girl (in my humble opinion), Chitose is now only barely above her. I know it's weird, especially when I knew it was going to happen, but I feel particularly betrayed by this.
 
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For a man with deranged, violent fantasies, there sure was a lack of highschooler teeth being kicked in.
We don't know what happened for a good chunk of that sex scene. Masumi left kind of frightened, so who knows what he really did to her. One can only hope she stays away, but I doubt it.

With the severed head's eyes starting to open, we're definitely starting to get to the tipping point.
 
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Did you play the game before OP-kun? I feel like you are just dropped a big foreshadowing kek.
 
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Did you play the game before OP-kun? I feel like you are just dropped a big foreshadowing kek.
No, I'm going through this blind. I've read Sayooshi, which is this company's most famous work. And so judging from that, I have certain ideas where I suspect this work might be going. But I really don't know.
 
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That last scene where blueshit enters the love hotel just pisses me off on a personal level. And I have generally an idea why the Chitose was hanging around MC-kun, sad cunts like to bond with other sad cunts, and the stalker bitch encounter proved in her mind that he isnt really what she assumed him to be - another fellow sad cunt, which ironically enough he is.

Oh god, I hope you drop a new post soon OP. I am starting to get personally interested in this plot. I wonder how much more shit our soon-to-be Supreme Gentleman will take before finally snapping.

I also wonder how soon (or even if) we find out what happened at that love hotel when MC-kun shagged the minor.
 
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I hope the ending will be dark andbitter, yet very cathartic and satisfying on multiple levels. The setup is just too perfect...
 
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My aim is to get the next part out in 3 days. Glad to hear people are getting invested in the story!

Although there is no English translation, apparently there are fan-translations in Spanish and Chinese. So if you can read either of those languages, and are interested in reading along, I completely encourage it! Just don't spoil things if you get ahead
 
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apparently there are fan-translations in Spanish and Chinese
That's weird to hear when it's always english translations coming out first. I've seen some people translating NES games to Finnish but it's a rare sight since usually the path is Original language -> English -> everything else
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That's weird to hear when it's always english translations coming out first. I've seen some people translating NES games to Finnish but it's a rare sight since usually the path is Original language -> English -> everything else
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It's definitely an anomaly, and honestly I would happily trade over 10 English translations of other VNs to have both this and it's spiritual successor Sayooshi get English translations
 
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Part 6:

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{God, yesterday really was the worst...}
Is the first thing we think when we get to the office. However, we soon realize that we are the first here. We kill time a bit looking at our desk and preparing to do some paper work, but just as we start that the phone rings.

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It's Chitose. At first she's a little surprised that we are the one picking up the phone, but then she just plainly tells us that she's not feeling well and will take the day off.


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Just as we hangup the phone the manager comes in. He asks who we were talking to, and we tell him that Chitose will be taking a day off. {"She's taking a rest day? That's a first"}.

This guy doesn't express much emotion (other than anger on occasion), but he seemed concerned about Chitose since taking rest days is so a rare for her. She's definitely not okay.

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Partly because we're kind of stressed from yesterday, and partly because (apparently) we don't have anything pressing to do at work, we decided to go out for a bit.

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We wander the usual streets for a while. Things are pretty ordinary. Salary men bustling around, and overall just the usual. But then we return to outside the station, and overhear a girl scream at someone, {"Christ, having to hear everything about what you have to say... Who do you think you are?"}

At first we dismiss the scene, {A fight this early in the morning? Who the hell has the time for that}. But then we see who's doing the arguing.


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Look, it's the worlds most loving sisters. Honestly, if Cain and Able had modern female counterparts, it would probably be theses two...

Anyway, Nanae tries to convince Masumi to come back home. Telling her that their mother worries about her, but then Masumi tells her, {"Tell me, why the hell do I have to live together with the likes of you!?"}

This proves is too much for even us, and we decide to leave.


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Masumi: {"About that guy, he belongs to me now!"}

Nanae: {"That guy? You talking about Hioki?"}

Masumi: {Yeah, yesterday we both stayed at a hotel together.}

Nanae: {"So, you guy's really did it, huh?"}

Masumi: {"Yeah, he's already mine! Someone like you should just spend their time settling for idiots like that stupid man!"}

Nanae: {"Fine by me. Hioki was just some guy fucked, I could care less."}

MC is kind of shocked by how blunt Nanae is, "To hear such a thing straight from the mouth of the person herself, it's pretty shocking." Despite that, he thinks it's best to leave. But then Nanae turns and spots him, {"Well, if it isn't Hioki himself?"}


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Nanae: {"So, what brings you here? Don't you have work?"}

MC-kun: {"Yeah, I'm kinda busy right now. I have to go."}

In the meantime Masumi runs off. I guess she doesn't want to talk to us, and definitely doesn't want to talk to both of us together. Nanae also mentions that she's got to get to work as well. So we both part ways.


She wasn't apologetic at all about basically calling us "just another dick I fucked". I kind of like her aloof attitude. Masumi on the other hand just screams of "I'm doing bad stuff to get attention, please pay attention to me!!!" vibes. She's insufferable, but quite believable all the same.

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We decide to head to our usual place to chill – the park. Hana runs into us, and asks if we're taking a nap, which we confess to. We notice that among the kids hanging around her, is the kid who kicked the soccer ball that slammed into us.

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She tells the kids to get ready to go home, and when it's just MC-kun and her she brings up the fact that they agreed on a date today (evidently it's payday). She confirms that he gets off work at 6, and then says to meet outside the station at around that time. We agree to see her then, and depart.



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Nanae: "Well, if it isn't Hioki?"

Leaving the park and heading back to work we run into Nanae on the way.

Nanae: "Regarding the previous conversation."
Nanae: "I heard you're having sex with my sister. She's kind of young you know."
Nanae: "So when you have sex, make sure to use condoms. Here, I'll even give you some."
Nanae: "Of course, when we're doing it lets keep it raw. Just kidding ~"
Nanae: "Well, that's all I have to say. Call you later sometime."


I legit Lol'd when she offered us condoms to use on her sister but told us not to use them on her. I think the reason I like Nanae, is because she's a pretty honest hedonist. Unlike her sister who uses sex as a weapon to manipulate people, she seems to be a legit hedonist just in it for the pleasure.

Personally I don't really endorse this approach to life. But if you are a person who prioritizes sensuality above all else, I think Nanae would make the ideal sex-friend.

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We knew this was coming... So we finally get back to the office after avoiding it all day and Blueshit is just waiting to brag to us. He tells us how right after entering the hotel with him, Chitose immediately got naked for him. He then goes into further details about her breasts and all the rest of it. We tell him to shut the fuck up, but he acts surprised. And then (fake) remembers that we also were going after her. He then asks us what the "taste" of that high school girl was like. He then tells us that he fucked her pretty hard, at least 5 times last night and that his own body is sore. Implying that's the reason Chitose is absent today.

You know, considering that JK (Joshikousei) aka high school girls are one of Japans top searched categories of porn, I'm willing to bet he's a little jealous of MC-kun. Which is why he feels such a need to rub it in about him getting Chitose.

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Blueshit's conversation triggers a pretty intense headache attack right after he leaves. It's so bad we want to go home, but we then recall that we have to meet with Hana. Forcing us to power through it.

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We force our way to the front of the train station where we agreed to meet Hana. The pain of the headache subsides, but it's replaced by an irritation of her lateness. 15 minutes pass, and she still hasn't shown up, until, {"Good evening☆"}

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Nanae greets us and asks what we're up to.

We tell her nothing in particular.

Nanae: {"Really? Because to me it looks like you're meeting up with someone."}




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Hana finally shows up, tell us {"I'm so happy. If you didn't come I don't know what I would have done."}

Nanae: "Wow, I have to say Hioki, you're doing better for yourself than I thought."

We then tell her to shut up, and ignore her. After she and Hana briefly introduce each other (we tell Hana that Nanae is just a friend), Nanae leaves.

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Hana: {"So, how about we come over to my place"}

Having spent the past week surrounded in sexual depravity, MC's interpretation of this invite reads a lot into to it. We tell her point blank that she should value her body more than that. She just looks at us confused, telling us that we must be confused because she just wanted to invite us for some home cooking as thanks for helping try to find that kid a couple days back.


Those two sisters from hell are really not a good influence on us...

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Hana takes us to her apartment, and as she implied before it's a pretty modest place. What's interesting however, is that we notice it's the same apartment complex that Chitose lives in (and we know this, because once before we peeked at some documents that had Chitose's address listed).

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With pleasure Hana presents us our dinner and is curious to know what we think. We tell her that we really like it, and she's happy to know. She then remarks that since we live alone, we probably mostly eat prepared food, which we admit. We tell her it's nice to have some real home cooking for once. She then mentions how important it is to eat healthy, and that she noticed that since many parents are too busy, she notices that some kids often bring lunches that were clearly bought from convenience stores. To encourage that the kids eat well, she shares recipes with the various moms.

Basically Hana is an angel and nothing about her doesn't scream wife material. MC would be wise to forget about that backstabbing whore Chitose and go for her instead. Who knows, since she lives in the same apartment building, she might even be the neighbor directly below them. Keeping Chitose up at night by having really loud sex with Hana everyday would be a one way to settle the score.

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Small talk ends, and Hana finally asks the question we knew was coming, {"Do you have a girlfriend?"}

We tell her no, but she's doesn't immediately buy it, saying that we looked really close with our co-worker (from that time him and Chitose were looking for that kid). We tell her that we only think of her as a coworker, and then she laughs because she remember Chitose insisting that very same thing. Hana then asks us if we want to drink a beer with her.


I'm serious, she's legit my waifu at this point.

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Getting up to get the beers, Hana trips and falls right on us.

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The shock of her fall triggers a headache attack, and coupled with it is a flash of us fucking Hana. Thankfully it's just a temporary intrusive thought.

Hana: {"Please sto- Stop!"}

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Hana: {"Why? Why are you doing something like this!?"}

MC: {"t-that because... Hana you're so pretty that's why!"}

This back and forth continues, where Hana begs us to stop and we keep her pinned down simultaneously apologizing and trying to justify our actions. Ultimately however, we come to our senses and let her go before anything could develop further. She then screams at us telling us to never come again, and that she had no idea we were the type of person to do something like that.


Jesus... I was really hoping that was just an extended delusion, but it wasn't. At the very least he didn't go through with it. Although things are definitely going to be awkward the next time we run into her at the park, that's for sure. Or maybe he'll finally stop going to the park and become a productive employee

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Our dream delusions come up afterwards, and like usual we replay the most traumatizing parts of the day. At first we replay Masumi saying, {"That man, he's my property now"}

We immediately recall Nanae's response.
Nanae: {"Well whatever, Hioki's just another dick to me anyway"}

We then remember some of the stuff blueshit said to us about Chitose, and then afterwards we have a very intense sexual fantasy involving Hana. It's a weird fantasy involving dirty water (I don't think it's piss play, but who fucking knows. This guy's delusions are pretty fucked)


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The severed head's eyes are still open.

Day 6 Concluding thoughts:

Last time I needed a drink because MC-kun got cucked, this time I needed a drink because MC-kun went full schizo and ruins his chances with probably the only decent girl in this VN.

Curiosity got the better of me, and since a significant choice hasn't really been presented since Day 1 when we had to decided whether to help Masumi or not, I decided to check what the other option would have led to. Let's just say, some very different results. In retrospect it was definitely a mistake to have helped her out. Although overall, I don't think it would make much of a difference anyway.
According to the vndb page, there are only bad endings to this VN, so I guess MC-kun is just doomed no matter what he does
 
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